So... I Found this thread over on 99chan a few days ago and posted a reply. I thought about just posting the whole thing as an original short work, but I can't open any of my files to write in.

Here's the original poster -> they are coming for us; I can't hold the choke point much longer. If you can't get the security system back online, well, smoke em if you got em--I know I am. Farewell, old friend.

[gunshots are heard echoing down the corridor , then the death cry of Agent B, stricken down by the intruders]

*Here's mine, remember I disregard puncuation,grammar and spelling to the highest degree. lol*




*Click click click* she managed to access the system lock and was granted passage into the next corridor. She heard the echo of gunshots and knew Agent B was down. She grimanced and bit her lip. She slung a bag full of her techno gear over her back and raced through the hall, skidding into a right turn. There! She could see it, just thirty feet away.

The Mainframe.

It would only take a quick virus scan and then a download of the needed code to restore the Security system. She reached the controls.

" Password" asked the computer.
" Fubot" she replied.

The computer system clicked and verified the password.
"Access-"

"Denied" Answered a voice from behind her pushing the point of the gun into the back of her skull.

*click*

well, I wrote it of the top of my head in less then 5 mins. I guess I'm just curious what you guys think..